This is excellent. You really nail the kabob structure and tell the story well as a result (watch out for the typos I’ve highlighted).

There’s some linking here too but try to link verb-and-noun not just the noun (e.g. “according to the Guardian” suggests that the link goes to the report, whereas “the Guardian” suggests the link will take us to the newspaper).

Also think about embedding — images, article previews (just paste a link on its own line).