Some great linking here, and you get the structure broadly right. Also some good use of quotes, and I liked the subheadings.

Start with the new thing, however (Coleen Rooney has accused someone of leaking her private Instagram posts), not when it happened (“Last week”)

Consider embeds: there are some key social media updates you could have embedded.

Avoid using loaded terms like “inexcusably” — try to stay factual rather than letting your opinion stray into the piece.