Paul Bradshaw
Oct 28, 2021

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Nice listicle Cassandra - don't forget to submit to the publication/share it on Slack for feedback - I only stumbled across this accidentally!

Try to keep the intro really punchy. Often the first par that you write is just a 'warm up' and one tip is to delete the first par and see if it works better without it (it does).

You use images and links and subheads all really well. Perhaps try to split some of the longer pars and see what words you can cut out to make it even punchier.

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Paul Bradshaw
Paul Bradshaw

Written by Paul Bradshaw

Data journalist and course leader of the MA in Data Journalism at Birmingham City University. Author of the Online Journalism Handbook.

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