Paul Bradshaw
1 min readOct 7, 2019

--

Nice introduction. I particularly like the way you’ve added images and video to illustrate it (make it multi-modal!), and you use a common technique in returning to the beginning to give yourself an ending.

Consider splitting up the pars to change the temporal flow of the piece — we’ll cover this in the next class!

--

--

Paul Bradshaw
Paul Bradshaw

Written by Paul Bradshaw

Data journalist and course leader of the MA in Data Journalism at Birmingham City University. Author of the Online Journalism Handbook.

No responses yet