Paul Bradshaw
1 min readOct 5, 2020

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A good idea with good visuals. Now to edit it: rewrite the intro to avoid cliche and overselling: "through this century and across time" doesn't make sense when your list covers just 7 years - make sure you're clear what the reader can expect.

Check the checklist on Moodle https://moodle.bcu.ac.uk/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=107792 - especially formatting subheads and linking (don't link at the end: it's not an essay - link as you mention each thing)

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Paul Bradshaw
Paul Bradshaw

Written by Paul Bradshaw

Data journalist and course leader of the MA in Data Journalism at Birmingham City University. Author of the Online Journalism Handbook.

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